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Whispered
written by: Tim Gallagher
10-17-2000

When the wind
Moves the trees
When the breath of God
Moves the leaves
I realize
How much, truly, I
(whispered) love you.

When the sun
Shines down here
When the eyes of God
Shine so bright
I realize
How much you mean
(whispered) to me.

When the earth
Spins Autumnly
When the hand of God
Paints the leaves
I realize
How much I'll
(whispered) miss you.

When the snow
Lies cold beneath
When the Love of God
Blankets all our sin
I realize
How little I
(whispered) deserve you.

When the rain
Falls down
When tears caught by God
Fill the oceans
I realize
How little I
(whispered) trust Him.

When the ocean
Tides move in
When the power of God
Draws us closer
I realize
I'm ready to drown
(whispered) in Him


Reader's comments

October 17, 2000 - 07:17pm
Tim
written in one sitting. I'm not sure if the word whispered would be spoken out loud if this poem was read aloud. I think not, I think it should be used as a way of reading the poem. either way, it says what I wanted to. -- smiles --
October 18, 2000 - 09:53am
Rachel G
Powerful. It says alot, and I know exactly what it says. I feel it myself.
March 08, 2001 - 11:07pm
mindy
wow...this is really good
April 05, 2001 - 10:55am
Lydia
I really like this one. I printed it off and kept it in my bedroom after I first saw it on the website! :)
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