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snow melt
written by: Tim Gallagher
01-04-2001

the snow outside is melting
warmed by the sun above
and in here, where it's all red
inside my chest, and in my head
i'm melting also, i'm all for you
holding you close, our love so true
makes me all warm and aglow
yeah, honey, you melt my snow

i used to think i'd never marry
i'm way too fat, way too hariy
then you, like a tropical breeze
came in here, and broke my freeze

if life's not all fun, if it's not a beach
just remember my love's within your reach

you melt my snow
my eyes turn streams
and sleeping we're in
each other's dreams


Reader's comments


February 06, 2001 - 05:25pm
Joyous
Oh, Tim!! That's so sweet. I thought there was no point in checking if you'd posted anymore, but I guess I was wrong. She's such a lucky girl, and you're such a lucky guy.

February 08, 2001 - 10:23am
Lydia L.
I AM such a lucky girl, Joy! :)

February 26, 2001 - 06:32pm
Carrie
Yay! That one made me laugh, Tim. HI LYDIA!!!! I love you sooooooo much!!! (You are lucky, and boy is Tim lucky too. Funny how God works out things like marriage isn't it?)

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