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Iron Birds
written by: Tim Gallagher
finished 09-12-2000

I stood still, the other day
On the top of a great high hill
Up into the blue they flew away
Merlin's iron birds with wings

These heavy beasts, defying gravity
Up in the breeze, and the blue sky

The passengers talk of white and blue
The pilot talks of gauges and dials
The passengers talk of breezy cloud meadows
The pilot talks of rudders and ailerons

Merlin still stands, watching the sky
Watching the iron birds give birth
100, 200, now a thousand, thousand thousand
Too many birds to count

The poet stands, still, watching
Wondering where the art, the beauty
Wondering why peanuts instead of meals
Wondering why dollars, instead of sense

The dark plumes of smoke
Coming out of the iron wings
Looks dark and dangerous
Like a back-alley in the city

The passengers talk of fluffy water
The pilot talks of parachutes and danger
The passengers talk of life and love
The pilot talks of death and despair

Suddenly, the plume grows
Darker and brighter all at once
Smoke, sparks, and fire belching
From the iron birds in the sky

A great big cloud of dust, and smoke
Flames rage, the iron bird screams
Or rather, the passengers are screaming
Merlin looks on with inquisitive eyes

After the fire has burned out
Merlin approaches the scene cautiously
Not wanting to admit his failure
Not seeing the lives sacrificed to his dreams

Merlin's magic has failed
The smoke still rises to the sky
Up to the breezy cloud meadows
He gives us an explanation

Merlin always has an explanation
He's never wrong, just "almost"
"Almost had it there."
Next time will be perfect

Merlin doesn't understand:
Life is more precious
Than progress will ever be


Reader's comments


October 06, 2000 - 06:10pm
Tim
I started writing this poem last January, but didn't finish, or rather, didn't feel like the poem was ready for the website. I didn't change much, just deleted one last verse that didn't belong with the rest of the poem. I am quite satisfied with the poem, it says exactly what I wanted to, it might not have perfect rhythm, or rhyme, but I like the message. Merlin is synonymous with technology, or science - not that either are bad in any way. But when dollars or progress come before the value of human life something is terrible wrong.

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